Let's use this in a video game WINK WINK WINK WINK WINK. but seriously it's good, but it's not earthbound-y, it's like you were making a rap beat and gave up mid-way through. Then you put in chords on octaves that were either too high or low and felt out of place. You aren't doing chiptune or even a beat. I would suggest this: The snare beat thing keep but try to pitch it to a chiptune style and then turn it down so it won't blast your ear drums. Get rid of all the piano, and if you're looking for ambient and chill, try toning it down a bit. Have the chords be more like a repeat like you did. It all sounds weird to me like it doesn't fit. If you don't understand what i mean we can talk about it on discord, it's really hard for me to describe here cos i can't send links.
This sounds like a KKK video game title screen. 10/10!
Nice Job, dude!
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